It was extremely difficult to find letters regarding health and college students.
Example 1
C- Black writing on white paper
R-talking about his skills and accomplishments
A- very straight and professional
P-No proximity
P-To persuade for a job
A-Audience is Mr.Weatherby
G-Cover Letter
E- A possible job
Example 2
The second example is very informal and it is to a self. It is not what I am looking for, although it is good motivation. The contrast is good because it is meant to be entertaining and motivational. The alignment is bad because it is informal. There is no proximity because it is a letter.
P-To persuade and control
A-Own Body
G-Letter
E-A fit body
Example 3
C-Black on White
R-Explaining skills
A-Straight and professional
P-No proximity
P-Express interest in administrative assistant position
A-Future employer
G-Cover letter
E-Possible job
EXAMPLE 1
7 Apple Court Eugene, OR 97401 503-555-0303
Mr. Archie Weatherby California Investments, Inc. 25 Sacramento Street San Francisco, CA 94102
Dear Mr. Weatherby,
My outgoing personality, my sales experience, and my recently completed education make me a strong candidate for a position as an insurance broker for California Investments, Inc.
I recently graduated from the University of Oregon with a degree in marketing, where I was president of both the Future Business Leaders of America and the American Marketing Association.
Although a recent graduate, I am not a typical new graduate. I attended school in Michigan, Arizona, and Oregon. And I've put myself through these schools by working such jobs as radio advertising sales, newspaper subscription sales, and bartending, all of which enhanced my formal education.
I have the maturity, skills, and abilities to embark on a career in insurance brokering, and I'd like to do this in California, my home state.
I will be in California at the end of this month, and I'd like very much to talk with you concerning a position at California Investments. I will follow up this letter with a phone call to see if I can arrange a time to meet with you.
Example 1
C- Black writing on white paper
R-talking about his skills and accomplishments
A- very straight and professional
P-No proximity
P-To persuade for a job
A-Audience is Mr.Weatherby
G-Cover Letter
E- A possible job
Example 2
The second example is very informal and it is to a self. It is not what I am looking for, although it is good motivation. The contrast is good because it is meant to be entertaining and motivational. The alignment is bad because it is informal. There is no proximity because it is a letter.
P-To persuade and control
A-Own Body
G-Letter
E-A fit body
Example 3
C-Black on White
R-Explaining skills
A-Straight and professional
P-No proximity
P-Express interest in administrative assistant position
A-Future employer
G-Cover letter
E-Possible job
EXAMPLE 1
7 Apple Court Eugene, OR 97401 503-555-0303
Mr. Archie Weatherby California Investments, Inc. 25 Sacramento Street San Francisco, CA 94102
Dear Mr. Weatherby,
My outgoing personality, my sales experience, and my recently completed education make me a strong candidate for a position as an insurance broker for California Investments, Inc.
I recently graduated from the University of Oregon with a degree in marketing, where I was president of both the Future Business Leaders of America and the American Marketing Association.
Although a recent graduate, I am not a typical new graduate. I attended school in Michigan, Arizona, and Oregon. And I've put myself through these schools by working such jobs as radio advertising sales, newspaper subscription sales, and bartending, all of which enhanced my formal education.
I have the maturity, skills, and abilities to embark on a career in insurance brokering, and I'd like to do this in California, my home state.
I will be in California at the end of this month, and I'd like very much to talk with you concerning a position at California Investments. I will follow up this letter with a phone call to see if I can arrange a time to meet with you.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
John Oakley
EXAMPLE 2
EXAMPLE 3
My own cover letter